tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post8066538592537887978..comments2023-12-30T19:34:10.283+00:00Comments on Older Mum (In A Muddle): 100 Word Challenge - PushedOlder Mumhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02923339244117157344noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-87688796557015049582013-02-08T15:28:25.974+00:002013-02-08T15:28:25.974+00:00Thank you so much. Yes it is part of a longer stor...Thank you so much. Yes it is part of a longer story - glad you are asking those questions, that's what I had intended! Older Mumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02923339244117157344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-6876701687406085022013-02-08T15:27:15.076+00:002013-02-08T15:27:15.076+00:00Great! Thank you so much - that was lovely feedbac...Great! Thank you so much - that was lovely feedback :o). Older Mumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02923339244117157344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-58020728329201889702013-02-08T13:58:41.237+00:002013-02-08T13:58:41.237+00:00Is this part of a longer story? The suspense in th...Is this part of a longer story? The suspense in this piece is brilliant. Was he pushed? Did he jump...? I love the line 'Beneath the surface, I saw the scolding bubbles of self reproach.' Great use of the prompt.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-32421994459946374082013-02-07T21:00:28.842+00:002013-02-07T21:00:28.842+00:00Wow this snippet of story really caught my attenti...Wow this snippet of story really caught my attention. I realize I have missed many weeks, I love how you capture the story in conversation. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-6116287940320146052013-02-06T21:00:57.320+00:002013-02-06T21:00:57.320+00:00Ah thank you - I took the right narrative turn the...Ah thank you - I took the right narrative turn then. I'm a bit flummoxed though as to the direction this is going in now. Hope I don't disappoint! Older Mumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02923339244117157344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-52307236433754779382013-02-06T20:58:46.718+00:002013-02-06T20:58:46.718+00:00Thank you - hope you enjoy! X.Thank you - hope you enjoy! X.Older Mumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02923339244117157344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-87077914725104674792013-02-06T20:58:12.433+00:002013-02-06T20:58:12.433+00:00Thank you! It was lovely, thank you - that's m...Thank you! It was lovely, thank you - that's my next blog post funnily enough! And thank you so much - really kind of you! X.Older Mumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02923339244117157344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-48484767887420001292013-02-06T20:54:28.111+00:002013-02-06T20:54:28.111+00:00Thank you ... please do come back and read the res...Thank you ... please do come back and read the rest and let me know your thoughts!Older Mumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02923339244117157344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-51027041666482625832013-02-06T20:53:54.632+00:002013-02-06T20:53:54.632+00:00Thank you ... more to come!Thank you ... more to come!Older Mumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02923339244117157344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-58711212465354747442013-02-06T20:53:10.016+00:002013-02-06T20:53:10.016+00:00Cheers my dear!Cheers my dear!Older Mumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02923339244117157344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-7842507914728206202013-02-06T16:55:16.579+00:002013-02-06T16:55:16.579+00:00I'm actually glad he was pushed (not for David...I'm actually glad he was pushed (not for David) but for the story. Makes for a much more exciting ending. Keep it coming! :0)Mummy Plumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10746501465644149765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-37340778308671189302013-02-06T16:06:26.420+00:002013-02-06T16:06:26.420+00:00I still haven't read the rest of the story and...I still haven't read the rest of the story and so so need to.<br />Liska xNew Mum Onlinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14285584922202683960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-34204442584866036252013-02-06T11:49:16.016+00:002013-02-06T11:49:16.016+00:00Oof that's horrible. Well done!
Hope little A...Oof that's horrible. Well done!<br /><br />Hope little A's birthday party went well. I want to hear all about it. <br /><br />I nominated you for a MAD blog award. And very hard work it was too. (Kept having to start again. Most odd) Anyway, good luck. xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-87183685726449846582013-02-05T18:45:28.435+00:002013-02-05T18:45:28.435+00:00Oh! This got my attention. I'll have to rememb...Oh! This got my attention. I'll have to remember to check back in and read the other parts of this story. Thanks for sharing. :)<br /><br />Hole in the Ground: http://www.aliciaaudrey.com/blog/hole-in-the-ground/Aliciahttp://www.aliciaaudrey.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-20297833228611047222013-02-05T15:41:03.996+00:002013-02-05T15:41:03.996+00:00a great cliffhanger! And definitely leaves you wan...a great cliffhanger! And definitely leaves you wanting to know moreDeehttp://knowingmoreorless.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-18727298903443932882013-02-05T14:35:48.771+00:002013-02-05T14:35:48.771+00:00Aaaagh - brilliant!Aaaagh - brilliant!Older Single Mumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16752771952921898184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-78615161788390916652013-02-05T14:06:57.080+00:002013-02-05T14:06:57.080+00:00And that part of you is probably correct!And that part of you is probably correct!Older Mumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02923339244117157344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-89978268540961637342013-02-05T14:06:34.388+00:002013-02-05T14:06:34.388+00:00Thank you...Thank you...Older Mumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02923339244117157344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-45822021208979541922013-02-05T14:06:25.720+00:002013-02-05T14:06:25.720+00:00Cheers ;o). Nearly!Cheers ;o). Nearly!Older Mumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02923339244117157344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-55109102426358373262013-02-05T14:06:04.826+00:002013-02-05T14:06:04.826+00:00Thank you - I think so!Thank you - I think so!Older Mumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02923339244117157344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-26424101833275293862013-02-05T13:31:10.012+00:002013-02-05T13:31:10.012+00:00Oh no....there's a part of me that keeps wonde...Oh no....there's a part of me that keeps wondering if he was pushed...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15344931806224134121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-11103518886176926392013-02-05T12:03:10.124+00:002013-02-05T12:03:10.124+00:00I love the suspense!I love the suspense!Bohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05985370927609164513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-29014018561457833292013-02-05T11:45:06.315+00:002013-02-05T11:45:06.315+00:00... still a good read. Are you nearly there?... still a good read. Are you nearly there?bibsey Mamahttp://www.bibsey.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4269818854687226287.post-76522677782394610372013-02-04T22:49:12.457+00:002013-02-04T22:49:12.457+00:00Drum roll...this is shaping up to be a dramatic st...Drum roll...this is shaping up to be a dramatic story! The Prettygoodlifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13797098888794399299noreply@blogger.com